yo !! ppl….. I have been wanting to write a story book of my own since I read the first book”secret seven series” Here is a chance to vent everything….
certain hysterical moments are my interpretation of shots in movies… feed back is welcome..
chapter 1
He is a total waste of space. I am in an avoid mode. He is already late.. damn it!!! There… he gave a swift halt to the car and darted inside the inn. He caught my gaze which hurdled his haste. My eyebrows shot up in perfect disgust. He moved as if it hurted to. He reached a table and took a chair opposite to mine. Now my eyes were glued to his. Needless to say, he looked smart and exclusively handsome. He wore an icy blue baggies and a cafton materialed shirt. Well…that’s not going to perk me up. He was tracing the wooden pattern on the table with his fingertips. He gave a sweltery pull to the hairs of his mustache as if checking if it was still there. I asked him to look at me. He dint bother to budge. I dug my fingers in his skin and gave him a piquant pinch. Instantly he looked into my eyes and gave an apologetic grin. I pushed the stray pieces of my hair with a mild brush and stared at him. His eyes were limpid and glistened. Yo! may be he his sorry for what he did. He traced the lining of his eye with his index finger and discovered a drop of tear. The uniformed sexagenarian served us my orders. I stuck a forkful of spagetti in my mouth. The stuff was hot and delicious. He folded his hands over his chest and sank back comfortably in his chair. His nails took a place between his teeth. I finished the eats and looked at him. Hands on his side face, he looked outside as if a sick puppy in fetters waiting for the release after a scourging tragic punishment. This puced up my anger a little more. Out of the ordinary, I was bursting at him in an uncontrolled way. When we were out of ear shot of other people, ……….
to be continued
Arvind Jose said,
October 25, 2008 @ 6:45 pm
Nice going – good cliffhanger ending. You would make a nice mega-serial writer!
Yuvi said,
October 26, 2008 @ 4:28 pm
Hey complete this part pa. The one you showed me was awesome, and totally appropriate. Changes the whole tone completely, ‘kay? Jus do it